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Annyeongg guys , i'm back for the last chapter of Paralyzed...ahahha this is the longest chapter i've ever wrote....hehehe i'm sorry if the ending wasn't not really good or else....but enjoy reading guys...cekidot.... :D

CHAPTER 16 RELEASE & SWEET DAYS

Yuri : “You’re bleeding so much… Hyomin-ah…Hyomin-ah!!! Wake up…!!“

Yuri really panic in that situation , lucky that the police was came on time and help them , they brought Hyomin to the hospital. After Hyomin entered the Operation rooms , Yuri took her phone and dialed Jiyeon’s number.

Jiyeon : “What do you want ?! did you…”

Yuri : “Ji…Jiyeon-ah…Hyomin…..Hyomin.. “

Jiyeon was Heard Yuri talked about Hyomin , with a low voice like a cried people.

Jiyeon : “what’s wrong ? why you suddenly talking about Hyomin ? “

Yuri : “Jiyeon-ah , Hyomin…hyomin… “

Jiyeon : “what’s happened with Hyomin?!! “

Yuri : “she…she was in hospital… “

Hearing what Yuri’s said , Jiyeon quickly came to the hospital. She was in panic , worried her feeling mixed. When she was arrived at the hospital that yuri told to her , she running enter the hospital. Then she saw some of her friends already there also Hyomin’s parents , while Yuri crying near the doors. Jiyeon with anger expression approached Yuri , she grabbed Yuri’s shoulders and shaking it.

Jiyeon : “what you have done to her ? “

Yuri : “i…”

Jiyeon : “what you have done to her!!! answer me!!! “

Saw Jiyeon acted like that , Eunjung approached Jiyeon to separated her with Yuri.

Eunjung : “ Jiyeon..calm down! “

Jiyeon : “calm down ? there’s no time to calm down in this condition!! its must be Yu…“

Eunjung : “she didn’t do anything! “

Jiyeon : “what ? “

Eunjung : “ Hyomin help her when yuri got bullied by some guys , and Hyomin got stabbed by that guys. “

Eunjung’s words can make Jiyeon’s emotional down a bit. More than 2 hours they waited the surgery done after that they saw the doctor and some nurse came out from the surgery rooms. Jiyeon quickly stood up.

Jiyeon : “how’s her ? “

Doctor : “ the surgery was done , but she was stabbed too deep and lost many blood , we also got difficulty because the knife almost touching her heart. “

Jiyeon : “mwo ? “

Doctor : “ lets hope the best for her. if she can pass the critical periode until tomorrow , she will be fine. “

Jiyeon : “how if not ? “

Doctor : “just lets hope for the best. “

Jiyeon :”are you wanna say She couldn’t help ? “

Doctor : “I didn’t… “

Jiyeon : “you seems like really give up ,safe her.”

Doctor : “I already did my best. “

Jiyeon : “you’re doctor so safe her!! “

Once again , Eunjung pulled Jiyeon away from the doctor .

EUnjung : “she will fine. “

Jiyeon ; “but… “

Eunjung : “she….will….fine…trust me… “

Jiyeon just obeyed what Eunjung said to her . after Hyomin was moved from the surgery rooms to the ICU , JIyeon never stood up from her seat beside Hyomin. she kept sitting in there while holding Hyomin’s hand tightly. For more than 5 hours Jiyeon sitting in there , the night already late , Eunjung and the others going home first. They actually invited Jiyeon but Jiyeon rejected it , what she want now only want to see Hyomin wake up. Hyomin’s parents who saw what Jiyeon did approached her.

Hyomin’s mom : “ you better go home , you already so long in here. you need rest. “

Jiyeon : “no , I want to wait her. “

Hyomin ‘s mom : “ you looks pale ,just go home now. we will tell you if she was wake up.”

Jiyeon : “but… “

Hyomin’s mom : “I’ll call you first , so you can see she wake up later “

Jiyeon : “arraso….promise to me that you will call me quickly , omma-nim. “

Hyomin’s mom : “ne… and thanks for keep my daughter .”

Jiyeon : “ne ,I’ll go first. Good nite omma-nim. “

Jiyeon bowing to Hyomin’s mom and father then leave them. In outside accidentally she was met with someone. It’s Sunny , she’s standing in front of Jiyeon and staring at her coldly.

Sunny : “you better stay away from her. “

Jiyeon : “who are you until you can prohibited me to meet my own girlfriend.”

Sunny : “girlfriend ? funny , you call her your girlfriend while you cheating on her , don’t you know , you already hurt her when she saw you and iu… “

Jiyeon : “we didn’t do anything. “

Sunny : “She was kissed you and you said nothing happened ? “

Jiyeon : can we talk about that later ? don’t you saw how Hyomin condition now ?if you want to hit me , kick me , yelled on me , its up to you but later after Hyomin wake up. “

Jiyeon leaved Sunny then after she said that.

***

After from hospital , hwayoung was drove her car to her house , but she felt so thirsty then she was stopping her car in front of the minimarket. She bought some softdrink and foods then going to come to her car before she heard some noisy near the minimarket.

“Today is your deadline , why you couldn’t pay!! “

“I’m sorry , but I didnt has money today , give me a time. “

“you always said like that!! no time for now ! pay it or you get out from the house now!!”

“but , ahjumma…please. I just fired from my job , I need a time to find new job.”

Hwayoung a bit familiar with that person’s face until she remembered about the girl which got her anger a few days ago from café.

“no chance now get the hell out from my house!!! “

The girl pushed by the woman roughly , she almost fall before Hwayoung reaching her body to help her.

Hwayoung : “gwenchana ? “

“you ? “

Hwayoung : “yah ahjumma! You don’t need to treat her like that! “

Ahjumma : “who are you , its none of your business! “

Hwayoung : “how many she must pay ? “

Ahjumma : “ she’s…”

“no , I don’t need your help. “

The girl prevented hwayoung to pay but hwayoung didn’t heard her , she took some money from her pocket and give it to that ahjumma.

Hwayoung : “is that enough ? “

The ahjumma nodded , while hwayoung help the girl to stand up , she took the girls bag and bring her to her car. They kept silents for a while , no sound until Hwayoung decided to talk.

Hwayoung : “I’m sorry. for what I did to you a few days ago…I didn’t know…”

“its okey. is not your fault.“

Hwayoung : “ so , where I must bring you ? “

“Molla , I only have that house , but…you know…the owner already kick me. “

Hwayoung : “ well , okey then. How if you stay at my house first ? tomorrow we will looking for new place for you. “

“no , thanks. Just bring me to the near ill. I will stay in there.”

Hwayoung : “its okey , you can stay at my house. “

“But… “

Hwayoung : “ assumed it as my apology to you , because of me you became like this.”

Hwayoung then brought that girl to her house , after arrived there she brought that girls to the one rooms. she took her bags in there.

Hwayoung : “you can sleep in here. “

“thanks….but I was burdened you , I’m sorry.”

Hwayoung : “ its okey and your welcome. By the way , can I know your name ? we already talk so long but didn’t know each other name. hehe “

“oh , sorry. my name is Lee Areum. “

Hwayoung : “nice name , I’m hwayoung. Call me hwa. Nice to meet you Areum-ssi.”

“nice to meet you too. Hwayoung-ah.”

Hwayoung : “so , its time to sleep. You must be tired. “

Areum : “ne, once again thank you.”

Hwayoung : “your welcome. Good nite.”

Areum : “nite.”

***

Early morning , Jiyeon woke up from her slept. she wanna visited Hyomin quickly but when she stood up she felt so dizzy on her head.

Jiyeon : “hufht…I think I got fever. “

Jiyeon mumbled while touching her head which felt so hot. But she didn’t want to take a rest or else , she just want to visit Hyomin this morning , she was hope that Hyomin will wake up when she come. 10 minutes after take a shower , Jiyeon checked her phone but no call , Hyomin’s parents was promised to her if Hyomin already wake up , they will call her. But until now , no call from Hyomin’s parents. Jiyeon then decided to come to hospital , before she going there , she stop on the flowers shop , to buy a bucket of rose flowers for Hyomin. Then continue her way to the hospital , when she was there she met with IU in front of the hospital. Jiyeon approached her.

Jiyeon : “IU-ah.”

IU : “oh , I’m waiting you. huh ? you looks pale ,are you sick ? ”

Jiyeon : “me ? for what ? oh , just got a little fever.“

IU : “ to visit Hyomin of course.i think you need doctor.”

Jiyeon : “I’m okay , lets meet Hyomin.”

Jiyeon and IU then walking together , entered the hospital.

IU : “I’m sorry.”

Jiyeon : “about ? “

IU : “yesterday , its my fault. “

Jiyeon : “gwencahana. “

IU : “I shouldn’t did that , so there’s no misunderstand between you and Hyomin. “

Jiyeon : “we will explain it to her when she wake up later. “

IU : “do you think she will understand that ? “

Jiyeon : “My Hyomin is the most understanding person in the world . she will understand. “

IU : “you really happy with her right ? “

Jiyeon : “she’s…precious for me. “

IU : “arraso. Lets quickly meet her. “

IU reaching Jiyeon’s hand and pulled her quickly to the Hyomin’s rooms. But what they got after was there is not like what they think. Many people gathering in there , they looks so sad , JIyeon also saw Hyomin’s parents crying. Jiyeon then slowly enter the rooms , she saw the nurse slowly took off Hyomin’s life support.

Jiyeon : “no! what are you doing! “

Jiyeon reaching that nurse hand and slapping away.

Jiyeon : “she still need that! “

Nurse : “bbut miss , she’s…”

Jiyeon : “she’s what ? “

Doctor : “I couldn’t hear her heart beat anymore , she’s…….gone…. “

JIyeon : “mwo ? no! how could you said that!! “

Jiyeon then approached Hyomin’s body. She was shaking her body and whispering.

Jiyeon : “wake up baby , I know you’re strong. “

Jiyeon kept whispering that words to Hyomin who still no reaction. She kept said that while slowly her eyes was tearing. Eunjung who saw it then try to separated her with Hyomin.

Eunjung : “JIyeona…she’s….”

Jiyeon : “she still alive!! “

Eunjung : “jiyeon..”

JIyeon : “I know she still alive ! baby wake up! I’m here….”

Eunjung kept pulled JIyeon away from Hyomin.

Eunjung : “JIyeon , enough.”

JIyeon : “no! let me go !! “

Jiyeon forcely released her self from Eunjung’s held and comeback to Hyomin , she was reaching Hyomin’s hand and hold it tightly.

JIyeon : “baby , please wake up. wake up! “

Then suddenly , Jiyeon felt Hyomin’s hand was moved.

Jiyeon : “she moved , doctor she’s moved! “

Doctor : “what ? imposibble…she’s… “

Nurse : “doctor , the ECG showed the graphic again , her heart beating again slowly. “

Doctor : “mwo ? “

The doctor then checking Hyomin’s condition , she checking her pulse , her heart until suddenly Hyomin’s eyes was opened slowly. She saw Jiyeon beside her and smiling weakly.

Jiyeon : “baby…”

Hyomin : “you felt hot…. “

Jiyeon : “my baby , you woke up. “

Hyomin : “got…fever ? “

JIyeon : “ssssh…don’t talk too much. “

All the people inside there was very happy saw that miracle in front of them , the miracle which bring the most people they loved back.

***

A Few days Jiyeon spent her time to keep Hyomin at the hospital , she was treated Hyomin so well. Until the day when Hyomin can go home , because her condition was more better,she just need rest time to complete healing. Even at Home , Jiyeon kept asking to Hyomin’s parents to treat her at home and Hyomin’s parents gave her permission.

Jiyeon was more than happy when she got permission to treat Hyomin at home , she was stay at Hyomin’s house more than a weeks. Tonight Jiyeon make some dinner for Hyomin. She then bring the food to Hyomin’s rooms , inside there she saw her girlfriend reading some books while still laying on her bed. JIyeon smiled , she put the food on the table and grabbed Hyomin’s book from her hands.

Hyomin : “hey I still read that. “

Jiyeon : “too much reading is not good for you , time to dinner.”

Hyomin : “I’ll eat , but give me back my book. “

Jiyeoon : “no after you take your dinner.”

Hyomin : “why you acted like my husband.”

Jiyeon : “because i’m your husband , even we didn’t married. “

Hyomin : “since when huh ? “

JIyeon : “since you belongs to me. “

Jiyeon gave a peck kiss on Hyomin’s lips while Hyomin replied her happily.

Hyomin : “can that lips be my dinner tonight ? “

Jiyeon : “ wow , looks who’s byun now. you want my lips more ? “

Hyomin : “well….i miss it… “

JIyeon : “what are you going to do when you get it ? bite it ? “

Hyomin ; “ maybe yes. “

JIyeon : “ that’s gonna be great then. “

Hyomin : “ but I was afraid. “

Jiyeon : “afraid for what ? leave wound on my lips ? “

Hyomin : “is not a wound that I was afraid for….but control.”

Jiyeon : “control ?”

Hyomin : “yes your control , I bet that you will asking me for more than bite that lips.”

JIyeon : “hmmm, how do you know that ? “

Hyomin : “because I know your byun mind. “

“takk! Ouch. “ Hyomin Hitting Jiyeon’s head and giggled.

Jiyeon : “Hyomin-ah. “

Hyomin : “ne ? “

Jiyeon : “thanks because you still beside me. “

Hyomin : “ I ever said before that I’ll always beside you.”

JIyeon : “and I’m sorry…about IU and me… “

Hyomin : “IU already told me. she said the truth. No need to apologize. Its just me who misunderstand about you two. “

Hyomin put her hand on Jiyeon’s cheek and carees it , while JIyeon held Hyomin’s hand back and kiss it , she then smiling on Hyomin.

JIyeon : “thank you. “

Hyomin smiling back to Jiyeon before her lovers was lock her lips on Hyomin’s. This time is not a peck kiss that Hyomin got from her lovers , but a long passionate kiss from her lover , the person that she love the most in this world. The long passionate kiss was become more heater for them , until Hyomin’s felt that JIyeon’s hands was slipping under her shirt. Hyomin knew what her lover want and let her do it. The dinner time is gonna be the long dinner time for them.

***

School time was coming , the time when all T-ara prince comeback to school after a hardtime they got. There’s Boram who coming to school while brought some books , then followed by Soyeon who approached while brought so many bags.

Soyeon : “Rammmbooo….. “

Boram : “oh..Soyeon-ah. Huh ? what’s that ? “

Soyeon : “clothes. “

Boram : “wow , for who ? “

Soyeon : “you of course , I bought it yesterday. Hehe. “

Boram : “mwoya , you bought all this clothes just for me ? “

Soyeon : “uhuum.”

Boram : “yah , I already has many clothes from you , chk. If you kept bought me clothes again , I will confused where’s that clothes I must put , because my qupboard already fulled. “

Soyeon : “yah , just shut up and accept it. I bought it for you. “

Soyeon pouted , while Boram who couldn’t see her lovers mad , accepted it. Meanwhle in the other side , there’s other car just come and Hwayoung just came out from it. Hwayoung happily running to approache Soyeon n Boram and greet them.

Hwayoung : “good morning ladies, today is so happy day. “

“hwayoungg-ahh…. “

Suddenly there’s other people calling hwayoung , she turned and saw Areum running towards her.

Hwayoung : “huh ?areum , wae ? “

Areum : “you forgot your books and this is for you “

Hwayoung : “what is it ? “

Areum : “I made sandwich today , for you. for lunch , I made it as my thanks for you. “

Hwayoung : “ow…ne…thanks… “

Areum gave the books and lunch box to hwayoung ,while Soyeon and Boram only looking at both of them , they seems unfamiliar with the girls name Areum. Then Areum smile and leave hwayoung an the others.

Soyeon : “wo…who’s that hwayoung ? your girlfriends ? “

Hwayoung : “n…no…she’s my friend.”

Boram : “jinjja ? only friend ? “

Hwayong : “I swear , she’s my friend. “

Soyeon : “even she’s your girlfriend , its okey. “

Boram : “she’s cute and suit with you. “

Hwayoung : “ah…shut up…”

Soyeon and Boram giggled saw Hwayoung’s face turn to be red. Then The other couple come , Jiyeon and Hyomin approached the others while holding hand each other.

Hwayoung : “ouhh…Romeo and Juliet come. hehe “

Boram : “morning Jiyeon , hyomin how are you ? “

Hyomin : “annyeong , I’m fine. “

Hwayoung : “my pretty giiirllll…. I’m happy you’re fine. “

Hwayoung suddenly hugging Hyomin.

Jiyeon : “don’t too close.chk. “

Jiyeon who saw it seems annoying and separated hwayoung from Hyomin.

Hwayoung : “yah , I just hug her! “

Jiyeon : “no permission. “

Hwayoung : “why ? jealous ? “

Jiyeon : “just don’t too close. “

Hwayoung : “yea yea arraso… Jealouser.“

“Jiyeoooonaaa…..good morning. Mmuachhh… “

Suddenly IU come hugging JIyeon and kiss her cheek. Jiyeon was shocked , then looking at Hyomin , she’s afraid that Hyomin will misunderstand again.

Jiyeon : “IU…wh..what are you doing ?? “

IU : “kiss you , wae ? “

Jiyeon : “but…. “

Hyomin : “morning IU-ah. “

Hyomin greet IU happily , and its made Jiyeon confused. Because Hyomin didn’t jealous.

IU : “wae Jiyeoniii….confused why your lover didn’t respond ? hehe , she gave me permission to kiss you every morning on cheek. If I want. “

Jiyeon ; “what ? Hyomin-ah… “

Hyomin : “its just cheek , not more than that.”

Jiyeon : “mwo ? bbut…but…. “

Hyomin : “ its just cheek…while me… “

Hyomin leaning a peck kiss on jiyeon’s lips and smiled.

Hyomin : “that’s my morning kiss for you everyday. IU can kiss your cheek , but me your lips. Right IU ? “

IU : “hihihi…yea yea yea. “

Hwayoung : “come on guys , intimate time is over , lets go to class. Hehehehe “

“guuuuyyssss….i got good neeewws…. “

They saw Eunjung and Qri running happily approached them , they stoped and take a breath for a while , then smiling widely.

Qri : “my father , opened the T-ara prince dorms again. “

Soyeon : “ah jinjja ? how can ? “

Eunjung : “ Jiyeon’s father who asking it. “

Jiyeon : “huh ? my father ? “

Qri : “yes , Mr park was sign corporation agreement with my father and my father company was safed. “

Eunjung : “ uncle park yesterday was come to meet Qri’s father. And they talking at Qri’s father rooms now.“

Qri : “meet him Jiyeon , he was looking for you too. “

Jiyeon nodded and walking to meet her father’s while the other followed her. But Qri’s step was stopped when she saw sunny standing near the garage while looking at them . Qri come to her , she smiled and extended her hand to Sunny.

Qri : “follow us. “

Sunny : “ouh I… “

Qri : “ lets follow them , my dear dongsaeng , Sunny-ah. “

Sunny : “o…onnie… “

Qri : “ ne ? “

Sunny : “ gomawo. “

Qri : “ga ja.. “

Qri reaching Sunny’s had and pulled her , while Sunny more than happy now because finally Qri called her dongsaeng , which that’s mean she was accepted sunny as her own sister.

Jiyeon going to Qri’s father rooms , but before she arrive , she already saw Her father talking each other with Qri’s father and some bodyguard accompanied him too.

Jiyeon ; “Dad… “

Mr Park : “ouh , my dear daughter. You just come ? “

Jiyeon : “ne…. “

Mr Park : “ I’m waiting you because I want to show you something. “

Jiyeon : “what is it ? “

Mr Park was shifth his body to the left , and Jiyeon eyes opened widely after see it.

Jiyeon : “mom… “

Jiyeon saw her mom on the wheelchair looking at her softly and smiling.

Mrs Park : “Jiyeona , omma really miss you. “

Jiyeon became more shocked when she heard her mom calling her names. She come to her mom , and kneel down in front of her , holding her mom’s hands.

Jiyeon : “you remember me ? “

Mrs Park : “ of course I remember you , my lovely daughter. Jiyeon-ah. “

Jiyeon : “you call my name… “

Mrs Park : “mianhe…about before…”

Jiyeon : “mom , I really miss you too. “

Jiyeon with teary eyes hugging her mother tightly , her mom now remember about her and didn’t call her with her brother’s name. Jiyeon was more than happy today , she felt like a ton of burden already lifted from her shoulders and all her hurt heart totally felt cured.

***

The break time comes , Hyomin came out from her class with a bright smile , today is the best day she got so many good things. She wanna go to canteen with IU , before Yuri stop her.

Hyomin : “Yuri-ah. “

Yuri : “err…..i…i….hufht….can I going to the canteen with you ? “

Hyomin : “huh ? with…me ? “

Yuri ; “ne…I’ll treat both of you…”

IU : “ah jinjja….good then…ga ja… “

Yuri : “but I want to say something before. “

Hyomin : “what ? “

Yuri : “I want to say sorry to Hyomin , about what I already done to you this whole times , also….IU…. “

IU : “me ? “

Yuri : “I’m sorry for a years ago. “

IU : “a years ago ? “

Yuri : “the accident….its not Sunny who crashed you….but….me… “

IU : “mwo ? so you… “

Yuri : “ne…its me. “

IU ; “Yuri-ah…how could you did that to me ? “

Yuri : “I was jealous and didn’t like how your relationship with Jiyeon. “

IU : “ Yuri-ah….you really make a big mistake you know… “

Yuri : “I know…mianhe… I really regret it. “

IU seem really disappointed with Yuri , Hyomin who saw it then reaching both of the hands and hold it tightly.

Hyomin : “past its only past , Yuri regret it , so IU why you didn’t gave her second chance to be better ? “

IU : “But… “

Hyomin : “God always gave a second chance to us , why you can’t ? “

IU : “that’s…because… “

Hyomin : “ just gave her a chance , okey ? IU …. “

IU : “ arraso….i’ll forgive her. “

Yuri : “jinjja ? “

IU : “yeah , like what hyomin said , its just a past. “

Yuri : “gomawoo. “

Hyomin ; “now , lets go to canteen. “

Hyomin brought her to the canteen , they sitting together in one table. Many students looking at them , they felt weird with Yuri’s closeness with Hyomin and IU. But Hyomin and IU didn’t care it , they kept chatting together while witing for their foods. Hyomin then saw from window there’s Jiyeon and Sunny standing under the tree , the place that Jiyeon usually come to reading some books every break time at rear garden, they seems like talking seriously. Hyomin who curious , then asking permission to leave for while and she got it.

Jiyeon : “if you want to hit me now , do it. Hyomin already wake up. “

Sunny just silents heard Jiyeon’s words , she was remember the time that Jiyeon told her to hit her after Hyomin wake up as a lesson , because Jiyeon hurt Hyomin.

Sunny : “I’ve ever said , if you hurt Hyomin once again , I’ll take her from you. “

JIyeon : “ I knew. But I couldn’t lost Hyomin , and I’ll never let her go. I’m better got hit until collapse than lost the most precious person in my life. “

Sunny : “ is that what you want , I’ll do it for you. “

Sunny walking more closer to Jiyeon , she clenched her palm tightly , ready to hitting Jiyeon , but before she do it she saw Hyomin come , Hyomin looks worried , she shook her head to Sunny to not did it. Sunny didn’t care about it , she moved her hand to Jiyeon’s face while JIyeon close her eyes tightly.

Hyomin ; “no!! Sunny!! “

“paak! “ Sunny slapping Jiyeon’s cheek , but not really hard. JIyeon didn’t felt hurt even a bit , she was confused.

Jiyeon : “huh ? Sunny… “

Sunny : “ I’ll make sure will make you collapse someday , if you hurt Hyomin Again. “

Sunny said that and smile , she then leaving Jiyeon in there. Hyomin approached Jiyeon , she checking JIyeon’s face.

Hyomin ; “gwenchana ? “

Jiyeon : “I’m okay , she’s not seriously hitting me. “

Hyomin ; “good then. “

Jiyeon : “I wonder why she didn’t do it. “

Hyomin : “maybe the angel realized her. hehe. At least , you didn’t get wound on your face anymore. “

Jiyeon : “but I’m okay if she want to did that to me. “

Hyomin ; “mwoya , you really want to get hurt. “

JIyeon : “well , if she hitting me I can get your attention , so if I’m sick you will take care of me , and spoiled me like a baby. Hehe I love that. “

Hyomin ; “yah! You want to get hurt just because you wanted my attention ? babo! “

Hyomin turning away from JIyoen and pouted, while Jiyeon just giggling. She then hugging Hyomin from behind.

Jiyeon : “angry ? “

Hyomin : “what do you think ? do I look like happy ? “

Jiyeon : “you looks ugly if you angry. You know ? “

Hyomin : “whatever. “

Jiyeon : “hahaha….i’m sorry baby. Don’t be angry please….“

Jiyeon said in a cute voice , and its make Hyomin giggled.

Hyomin : “you looks funny with that cute sound you know. lets go back to class. “

Hyomin smile and invited JIyeon to the class , but JIyeon holding her hand.

Jiyeon : “wait… “

Hyomin : “what ? “

Jiyeon : “gimme kiss ,first. A looooongg kiss like you did last night.“

Hyomin : “mwooo ? “

Jiyeon : “if you didn’t want I’ll force you…”

Jiyeon pulled Hyomin on her hugs and try to kiss Hyomin.

Hyomin ; “ya…yah….okey okeyy…I’ll give it… “

Hyomin did what Jiyeon want , she leaned a kiss on her lover’s lips , and kiss it passionately. “ckreeek! Ckreek! Ckreeek!! “ the flash light disturbed their moment. They realized that and saw who did it , there’s hwayoung smirked on them and giggled.

Hwayoung : “wohooo…its gonna be a good pic..i’ll displayed it at magazine’s school. The sweet moment of Romeo and Juliet…heheheh. “

Jiyeon ; “yah! Give me back the camera! “

Jiyeon try to reaching the camera but she failed.

Hwayoung ; “no…no…no…you can’t take it from me. hehe. What do you think guys ? agree to display it at magazine ? “

Hwayoung talking then suddenly the other’s T-ara prince was there , came out from the scrub , smiling evily.

Eunjung + Qri + Boram + Soyeon : “VERY AGREEEE…. “

Hwayoung laughed and she running away from Jiyeon , followed by the other’s member.

“YAAHH GUYSSS !! “ Jiyeon yelled to them but they didn’t heard her and kept running away.

“I wont kiss you anymore. “ Hyomin said with a blushed face because she felt embarrassed and leave Jiyeon alone under the tree.

“What ? NOOO…… baby don’t do that…..ya…yahhh…Hyomin-ah…”

:D FIN :D

Thank you very much for reading my fanfic....i was really happy because all of you like my fanfic....and thanks to all people who gave me support to write this and gave me a spirit....i'm sorry if the fanfic not really good from the first until the end....but i will do my best for the next fic....once again thank you very much to all my readers....Love Yaa.... :D<3 <3 <3 <3 :D

Posted

oh.... happy ending :D

forgive and start a new friendship :3

i thought hyomin will die, good thing you didn't let her die!

And Areum and youngie sure makes a great couple!!! :D

SoRam too haha

EunRi

and ofc JiMin!!! nice ending :D

Posted

hee hee... sweet JiMin moments makes me melt :P ...

why is that the interaction between Hwayoung and Areum is short? :unsure: uhhmm,, can you make a fic for them?.. they're a very interesting couple :wub: keke...

..job well done author-ssi.. hope you write more fics in the future :) thank you~! :D

Posted

Awww,,, Jiyeon and Hyomin is so cute... Hyo don't want to kiss Jiji because of Their naughty friends... :D

Btw,

Love the ending... <3

The ending is great...

Write jimin fic againnnn...

I will wait for it... :P

Guest minniebabyjiyeon
Posted

New comer here . Really love your story , not so many JiMin fic .

Please keep writing new fic of JiMin. Fighting

  • 1 month later...
Posted

I'm really excited and love to rea your fic because I'm crazy about the couple JiMin :) Your fic is fantastic and I want to share it Vietnamese Queens. Can I have your permission to translate your fic into Vietnamese and post to Viet amese Queens website?

Posted

I'm really excited and love to rea your fic because I'm crazy about the couple JiMin :) Your fic is fantastic and I want to share it Vietnamese Queens. Can I have your permission to translate your fic into Vietnamese and post to Viet amese Queens website?

if i wasn't wrong a long time ago , there's people who post this fic at vietnames web...but i didn't know , did that person really post it....well if you want to translate it into vietnamese its okey , but don't forget to put the credit...okey... :D

Posted

Ive read this over and over again but i just realize that i forgot to leave the comment

Sorry (´・_・`)

I Really love this and the ending is happy and cute><

can you make part2 or maybe another jimin fanfic \(><)/

thanks for your fic

Really make my day<3333

Posted

Ive read this over and over again but i just realize that i forgot to leave the comment

Sorry (´・_・`)

I Really love this and the ending is happy and cute><

can you make part2 or maybe another jimin fanfic \(><)/

thanks for your fic

Really make my day<3333

i have plan to make another new jimin fanfic....the concept was ready...just wait and be patient okey.... :D

Posted

O.O Oh its already the end *cry cry*

But anyway Yuri had already knew her mistake and Hyomin is safe.

Lol..silly Hwayoung and her love for taking pictures.

The ending is epic cute and lovely^^

  • 1 month later...
  • 3 weeks later...
Posted

i have plan to make another new jimin fanfic....the concept was ready...just wait and be patient okey.... :D

Plz add me in your newest JiMin fanfics' PM lists ^^ I really love to read your fic

Posted

Plz add me in your newest JiMin fanfics' PM lists ^^ I really love to read your fic

Oh Okey....actually its ready to post...but since my fanfic still 2 here..so i postponed it....i need to finish one fanfic first...then i will post Jimin fic....

  • 2 months later...
Posted

hey .. add me in your pm list.. i love this .. im a new reader but i have finished your fanfic until here and im willing to wait ,, pls .. i love this :)

Posted

hey .. add me in your pm list.. i love this .. im a new reader but i have finished your fanfic until here and im willing to wait ,, pls .. i love this :)

but this fanfic already end....hehe well , i will make another one , just wait until one of my fic done... ;)

  • 9 years later...
Posted
On 10/18/2011 at 2:27 AM, Blue_lotus said:

 

The next chapter is up,hope you like it...

:unsure:

 

 

 

CHAPTER 2

 

 

HESITATE HEART

 

 

 

 

Hyomin : "yeonie

Hi! I'm new and also a Jimin/minyeon shipper I liked your story a lot. i hope you can send me these missing chapters and add me to your pm list of other jimin fics Thanks♥️

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