Nice to see that this has finally made its debut!
Pretty fun game overall and in regards to improvements definitely hoping for an "expansion pack" =P Basically just adding in more content, basically this game has so much potential in advancing towards new missions.
That feature of playing Number 9 on the laptop was amazing! I guess as new songs get released, it can be switched to that
Notes (This is for things to possibly fix):
The opening tutorial:
Either just add a Period to the end of each line or remove the one for "right click to deselect" (bottom right text)
Opening Scene:
Possible feature to Skip (esc) or click to skip
Gameplay:
(Unsure how to point these out so I'm just going to type out the Entire line if that makes things easier to search by)
"Ok..." -> Suggest to either making it "Okay..." or "OK..." {Globally}
"It's locked" -> Suggest adding a "!"
For the Picture Frame of T-ara, possibly have the Text for each member be by the position of the girls.
Notepad, when you click on the Piece of paper, suggest changing "halves" to "pieces". On that same note, when you finish, the piece of paper becomes the cursor, even after you click on the "X" {Applies to any item selected}
Jiyeon's picture book: Suggest having the text be in the top left corner instead of overlapping the picture.